Fighting Pit - Board Description Discussion

[Xatch]

Here are the basic sub-board areas we have now, all held under "Catacombs:"

Tunnels (a general area)
Private Rooms
Box Seats
Pit's Room/Office
Medic

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If anyone would like to do a description, add a board, make a comment, etc, this is the place to do it.

[Schwimm]

Got a few descriptions up for critique:

One for the general, superboard of "The Catacombs"

The Catacombs: A place of dripping, damp darkness; interconnected tunnels, tombs, forgotten rooms carved deep into the bedrock. No one knows the Catacombs’ true extent, only that they appear to exist under every part of the Citadel. A major sector of the Catacombs has been claimed by a man named Pit, who uses it for his own unique…business, keeping out anyone who isn’t under his employ. The rest of the Catacombs are inhabited by a dark mix of Pokemon and humans-beggars, thieves, the homeless and lost.


Now, for the suboard "The Tunnels"

The Tunnels: Not all of the Catacombs are controlled by Pit; there are many places that even he does not dare enter, places that the rest of the world has forgotten. It takes a special kind of human to inhabit the…less civilized sectors of the Catacombs (if you could call Pit’s sector civilized). It is difficult to imagine that the silent, dangerous depths of the Catacombs can support human life. But then again, are you really alive if no one knows your name? The forgotten and lost call these Tunnels their home. Beware all those who dare trespass in their domain.

Hopefully more will be added tomorrow/Wednesday.

[Xatch]

Niklas's Office

Niklas's office is a rather ornate affair compared to the rest of the catacombs, having been soundproofed and carefully protected from the surrounding moisture. Dark stone tile covers the floor, while the walls are wood-paneled from the chair rail down and painted an almost maroon shade of bloody red from the same spot up. Directly across from the door there is a closed-front desk with a leather chair behind it. There the office atmosphere ends, for on the right lies a set of five comfortable-looking chairs and a locked cabinet full of various kinds of alcohol (mostly dark liquor). Despite the lounge atmosphere, the room seems to make people feel uncomfortable, as though someone could stick a knife in their back at any moment once they step inside.

Box Seats

Above the stadium proper lies "the box," the place where the owner of the Pits himself sits to watch the bloodsport below. If you pay well and have the right connections, you might even be able to sit there with him. Inside the box, a series of comfortable chairs rest, scattered around the room, while a trio of long-legged waitresses delivers refreshments. The box is well protected, having a separate entrance to get into it from the rest of the stadium as well as being guarded by several powerful pokemon - as well as normal bodyguards, armed with guns and unafraid of the legal penalties of using them.

I may edit those later, as my brain seems to have wandered off somewhere around the middle of the office description, but there it is for now.