Arkets - Of Electricity and Fire

[ark]

<sub>The Player:

OOC Account: Sn
Age: 17
Activity Level: Very Active (If I'm not boggled down with homework)
Other Characters: Ark

Basic Character Information:

Name: Arkets a.k.a Ark
Alias: None
Gender: Male
Age: 20
Allegiance: None yet
Position: None
Species: Pokemon, Arcanine/ Jolteon Mix
Sexuality: Straight


Hobbies:
~Zapping things
~Setting stuff on FIRE
~Driving other Pokemon crazy

Likes:
~Fire
~Watermelons
~Sleep
Dislikes:
~Most Humans
~Meowths
~Grass Pokemon


Physical Appearance
Information:

Fur Color:Main body is reddish orange while his tail fur is a jolteon yellow as well as the fur that starts atop his head and runs down his spine
Eye Color: Green with black "whites"
Height: 6 Ft 4 inches
Build: Lean and muscular

Other Appearance Information: Covered in dark black stripes up and down the body, jolteon like spines protrude out of the base of his spine and become erect and sharp when he is angered or defensive.


Personal Related
Information:

Personality:



History:Ark was actually a surprise egg to the trainer of his parents, sired by and Arcanine and birthed by a Jolteon. The trainer at first had considered of handing the egg off to someone else but decided to keep it simply out of curiosity of what would hatch from the fire red and black striped egg. Once Ark hatched from his egg the Trainer was at first pleased with what his pokemon had created, thinking that Ark was already powerful since his parents were the strongest in the trainer's team.

Upon finding that his newest pokemon lost to even water and grass types the trainer began to treat Ark with disdain, often neglecting to feed him or even let him out of his poke ball for a few days at a time. Obviously this forced the new pokemon to resent his trainer and even attack him any time he was let loose from the poke ball. Finally, maybe from spite or just annoyance the trainer simply left him in the wild to fend for himself. This is where most of his bitterness and anger toward humans comes from.

Often he has attacked humans simply out of his rage toward them and has once killed one, although this was entirely by accident. The incident happened before everything went to the fiery pit, at the time Ark had been living in the cliff side of a rarely traveled upon mountain. Keeping to himself that day he suddenly caught the scent of someone trespassing upon his land and instantly became angry, his territorial side kicking in, he followed the scent of the trespasser and attacked without looking first. To his horror he found that he had in fact killed a young human girl who had wandered away from home that day. Confused and soon persecuted by the other humans he was forced to flee from his home, unsure of what to make of the child's death.


Characters Pokemon:

Name: Ark
Species: Arkets - Arcanine/Jolteon mix
Age: 20
Level: 36
Personality: A calm and collect being who happens to be just a little too enthusiastic with his fire abilities, often setting small pile of leaves on fire then getting carried away and setting a tree on fire as well. Other then that he will avoid humans and prefers to spend his time alone and wander around as much as possible, never staying in one place

Ark is a rather calm being that prefers to brood and think about the condition of the world that is in constant motion around him. However he has the temper of his Arcanine Sire and is quick to set off into a rage, and with the speed of his Jolteon Dam he isn't one to be easily caught. Most of the time he will be friendly and placid around other pokemon but is extremely wary and maybe even a little bitter toward humans for the way they treat the fragile planet they call home.

Many a times you can find him a top a surviving hill from the destruction or just moving through the few trees that remain, searching for prey and something to feast upon. As afore mentioned he will avoid humans at any chance he can and dislikes them, thinking their kind to be weak minded, greedy and extremely unethical to the world in which they think themselves "Superior."


Attacks:
Flame Wheel
Thunder
Flamethrower
Agility


Role Playing
Sample:

Such a barren and desolate dirt patch this place had become, so unlike the green fields full of full rich grass that still held the dim caress of morning dew upon them. No longer was the air clean for the lungs of living things, now the air was tainted with malice and poison, the grass had been burned away long ago by the fires of hatred and the seeds of destruction had begun to grow in their place. And oh how fast those little seedlings grew into a vast jungle, a jungle full of fury and writhing hate, full of dark and angry creatures that sought to dismantle you one limb at a time as though treating you like some sick experiment.

Jade green eyes danced over the barren land while heavy red orange paws shifted the blackened soil underneath the brown orange pads, white claws as sharp as a rose thorn were pressed out with each step, the weight of the creature pushing them from their sheaths only for them to be withdrawn on each upbring of a paw. No longer did you hear the pidgey and chatot sing those odd little songs of theirs, nor did you hear spearows and Fearows fighting for territory over the vast land. If you were lucky what you could hear was the soft song the wind played.

Long pointed ears lifted from fiery yellow fur to listen in to the sounds the wind carried along with itself, humming and mixing like a sad lullaby that rang heavily within the drums of his ears. The large orange red body paused at that moment to listen in to the eerie songs that sang upon the wind. Songs of hatred, songs of fear and songs of sadness were the first to emerge. But if you listened carefully, soon the songs of joy, and the songs of happiness... thought to be long dead by now, also danced in your length of hearing and brought a smile to your lips.

But then a new sound, a heavy footfall, broke through the mixed songs and snapped the beast's attention a complete 360 around. Instantly the large pokemon whirled and tensed, the electric yellow spines at the base of his back bristling and sharpening in his defensive ways, becoming erect as though threatening to fly off their master and give chase after the threat. Without missing a beat those same jade green eyes narrowed as he stared at the one behind him, remaining tense before scoffing "What do you want?"</sub>

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[Feather]

Well--I jsut see a few easily fixed problems.

In the second part under "CHARACTER's POKEMON", move that paragraph under the main one and leave it blank.(we really need a seperate template for Pokemon.) Otherwise personality is too short.

The only other problem?

Cut down his level so he's in the 30-38 range.

Other then that..I see no problems with it.

[ark]

I think i fixed it right *Shifty eyes*

[Feather]

Approved--Even if personality is in the wrong spot.

You're our first pokemon in a while.

[ark]

Meep, still mixed it up... oh well...I get confused easily ^^;

[Feather]

It's Approved.